This is our second draft, this is completely different to our first draft as we didn't use any of the same footage as the footage that we previously used we felt needed to be changed. I think this this has improved so much and is a lot better than our first draft.
At the start of the second draft, the TV has nothing playing on it and this is something that will be done for our final as we have not yet been able to film the section that will be placed in this part of the film.
There is also no non-diegetic sound or music and this is also something that will be rectified in our next and hopefully final draft. We hope to not need to change to much in order to finish but we will change and re-shoot any segments we feel is necessary.
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